week 6 rewrite experience

For me personally, the rewrite experience was extremely beneficial and my blog is of a much higher standard now. The feedback I received was incredibly helpful, I was advised to use more quotations and sources and to add more structure to my entry. I incorporated both of these into my rewrite.

I added direct citations from the text, this not only added more credibility to my blog but also helped me cut down on long-winded explanations of points that an interviewee made.

I also added structure to my blog. I added an introduction and a closing, I also separated my points into different paragraphs. This massively impacted the blog, it is easier to follow and looks better at first glance. While splitting up my points it also helped me cut out any useless information that didn't fit with my main points. 

I found the peer review very helpful and will most definitely utilise the advise when writing future blog entries. 

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